Wednesday, 6 May 2020

Writing

We have been reading the BFG in class and for writing, we have written a description of the BFG.


He is taller than every single mountain. The BFG is shorter than the other giants
who are bigger than the BFG. He has one floppy ear and one non-floppy ear. His
nose is bigger than Sophie’s head. Some of the other giants can’t come into his
cave because the other giants are bigger than him.
Sometimes the giants pick on him, sometimes they throw him up in the air.

Once the bloodbottler tried to get Sophie. 



3 comments:

  1. Great writing today Cameron. I like the ideas you used and how you expanded your sentences with details. Keep up the awesome writing.

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  2. Great piece of writing, Cameron.

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