Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Kokatahi Primary School on the West Coast of New Zealand.
We have been writing simile poems. Here is my simile animal poem .
Great similies to describe your dinosaur. Next time you could try to use different words instead of repeating words such as strong and big. What other words could you use instead of these?
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Great similies to describe your dinosaur. Next time you could try to use different words instead of repeating words such as strong and big. What other words could you use instead of these?
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